I was thinking about that, but wasn’t sure of it.
That’s a good trick to pull, but you could make it more obvious or consistent, so people don’t suspect your writing skill (which you clearly have plenty of). Though that is hard to achieve in a text like a personal log, which was why I didn’t like that. Much better to write about in a short story format. 😛
And yes, we do enjoy Eric’s character building. 🙂