I am liking these stories. I’ll get these posted up tomorrow (unless there is more to add before you finish, in which case I can hang on). They are starting to get little nuggets of information across too e.g the data tablets. Its exactly what we are wanting.
On side note, data tablet size is being increased slightly (it was set at 9″ originally. I might figure out some more exact specs in terms of size, but just for a quick reference, the screen is increasing by a couple of inches). It has no impact on the story you have written though.
Great work and keep it up. At some point I’ll get back to writing more specifics about the universe (much of my focus has shifted to the Sandbox, initially so we could use it, but now to quickly expand it further).