Rakaydos,
what are you using to edit these texts?
– comments are not properly delimited
– quotation marks are not the standard character for a double quote (Is this from MS-Word?)
– nothing is indented
This makes it a bit of extra work to get into a standard vesseldata file.
If you could provide a vesselData.xml file in the same format you find it in the Artemis directory, it would help greatly.